tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post1979199216679453357..comments2023-06-26T04:58:34.444-04:00Comments on Cobbie's World: Hansel's CrumbsThomas Charles MacInneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-78837519042977080452013-06-03T18:39:58.261-04:002013-06-03T18:39:58.261-04:00Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them ...Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them very much. :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-2748982376185876332013-05-30T22:02:45.388-04:002013-05-30T22:02:45.388-04:00Really cool. You've created quite the picture ...Really cool. You've created quite the picture in so few wordsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15522880229017797116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-58746106201356095602013-05-13T11:36:42.774-04:002013-05-13T11:36:42.774-04:00I want to be a debaser, what can I tell you. :)I want to be a debaser, what can I tell you. :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-28272239649316513352013-05-13T11:35:47.097-04:002013-05-13T11:35:47.097-04:00Thanks. I've had that scene kicking around in...Thanks. I've had that scene kicking around in my head for some time now. Glad I was able to use it and that you liked it.Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-60187134558419142252013-05-13T11:34:11.757-04:002013-05-13T11:34:11.757-04:00Glad you liked the line. I have the odd stroke of...Glad you liked the line. I have the odd stroke of good writing skill, every now and again. :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-39804829659864962762013-05-13T11:32:44.656-04:002013-05-13T11:32:44.656-04:00Thanks and, awwwww shucks! :)Thanks and, awwwww shucks! :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-488945352417199132013-05-13T08:34:37.387-04:002013-05-13T08:34:37.387-04:00Very good piece!Very good piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-24890800064133866952013-05-13T07:39:58.059-04:002013-05-13T07:39:58.059-04:00You nailed the disorientation - of fog, of acciden...You nailed the disorientation - of fog, of accidents. Love that it is audio rather than visual.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-30003595511906292702013-05-13T00:34:25.101-04:002013-05-13T00:34:25.101-04:00This is exactly why I don't like driving in fo...This is exactly why I don't like driving in fog. Following the dashes into nothingness is so eerie!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-5420131119237049912013-05-13T00:13:16.356-04:002013-05-13T00:13:16.356-04:00Of course we're happy you're extending you...Of course we're happy you're extending your Trifecta experiences with your awesome students! Considering this great piece, they couldn't have a better teacher.<br /><br />Thanks for linking up!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12700687481057612773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-55112098584649899752013-05-12T19:11:55.838-04:002013-05-12T19:11:55.838-04:00Well, Atreyee, I can't be a goody-goody all th...Well, Atreyee, I can't be a goody-goody all the time. :). Glad you liked it anyway. Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-66070686281399878582013-05-12T19:11:04.029-04:002013-05-12T19:11:04.029-04:00We had a big pile-up not too long ago in my neck o...We had a big pile-up not too long ago in my neck of the woods, too. Glad you liked the post. Thanks for the great comment.Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-36595111572624228672013-05-12T19:06:41.889-04:002013-05-12T19:06:41.889-04:00Thanks, Draug. If I was a better writer I am sure...Thanks, Draug. If I was a better writer I am sure the scene would be taken to another level but, just the same, I think that the idea creating a scene devoid of visuals, focussed on sound, amid the danger of walking in a crash scene......wasn't the worst story idea I've ever had; especially for this weekend's sort of challenge. :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-77412235019907428922013-05-12T19:02:15.461-04:002013-05-12T19:02:15.461-04:00It is a great song for any scene. Nothing like sl...It is a great song for any scene. Nothing like slicing up eyeballs in the middle of vehicular mayhem.Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-527586922713190712013-05-12T17:15:05.284-04:002013-05-12T17:15:05.284-04:00How terrible!But so well written To,m:-)Can't ...How terrible!But so well written To,m:-)Can't wait to see what your talented bunch of kids come up with!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-55992449998254131922013-05-12T15:31:18.609-04:002013-05-12T15:31:18.609-04:00Great descriptive words to describe a crash.Great ...Great descriptive words to describe a crash.Great piece of writing. We had a 60-70 car pile up in central Florida a couple of years ago which was induced by fog. <br /><br />Feel free to use mine, especially since my story is set in a classroom. Kids might enjoy my making fun of the teacher! Lol!lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-53296541759007506382013-05-12T12:31:21.173-04:002013-05-12T12:31:21.173-04:00Whoa, this is cool. I love the dashes line.Whoa, this is cool. I love the dashes line.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-33033942149554875572013-05-12T11:22:18.269-04:002013-05-12T11:22:18.269-04:00Loved this: I followed the dashes
Into nothingness...Loved this: I followed the dashes<br />Into nothingness. What a great song for this scene.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-53368126972193272672013-05-12T11:07:32.617-04:002013-05-12T11:07:32.617-04:00I have always been fascinated by car crashes. In ...I have always been fascinated by car crashes. In a fog bank, one can only hear the sounds and imagine the scene. Being stunned adds to the disorientation of it all. So, my character is wandering amid the wreckage, the sounds all around him, while he follows the dash marks on the highway further into the fog. What becomes of a pedestrian/accident victim who starts wandering down a foggy highway? That is the big question.Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-89241280862148893442013-05-12T11:02:51.607-04:002013-05-12T11:02:51.607-04:00Thanks, Barbara! :)Thanks, Barbara! :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-57129697207162822312013-05-12T10:27:58.166-04:002013-05-12T10:27:58.166-04:00Read three times and seemed just a bit different e...Read three times and seemed just a bit different each one. I like when that happens. Fantastic. Share away! And I love when they share with us.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7519288249692657296.post-5901305972288271512013-05-12T00:20:56.946-04:002013-05-12T00:20:56.946-04:00oh, my . . . this is perfect!
Love to read what y...oh, my . . . this is perfect!<br /><br />Love to read what your students write. :)barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.com